What barriers or guidance should their be in obtaining genetic testing?
My professor gave me the feedback, so you need to edit and rewrite from the feedback.
I have more than 3 opposite and support arguments in my paper. You need to pick 3 supports arguments and 3 opposite arguments.
My professor said ” At times your writing is unclear. Good use of references throughout.
You have more than 3 arguments–it would be better to focus your writing on 3 supporting and 3 opposing argments.”
I have attached the outlines, guidelines that you need to follow, feedback paper, my original paper, and the grading rubric(blue color is what I received).
Follow APA format for all aspects of the paper: title page, in-text citations, references, etc.
The paper should be at least 3500 words of your own writing (about 14 standard double-spaced pages with 1” margins) plus additional pages for title and references.
You must use section headings: Introduction, Background, Opposing Arguments, Supporting Arguments, and Conclusion. You should also consider using sub-headers for each of arguments in order to more clearly separate and identify them.
Clearly give your thesis statement in a concise manner in an introductory paragraph.
Explain the background of the issue that gives a rationale for the topic being debatable. This section must include contemporary and historical information, relevant data and appropriate citations. The background should include:
Terminology related to your issue
Legitimate research done on your issue, from varied sources
Descriptions of the impact this data/research has on your issue
When presenting your arguments, discuss both sides of the issue. Identity and include defensible documentation supporting each position (such as: standards, codes, regulations, policy, criteria, and research findings).
Bring the paper to a conclusion by summarizing and restating your thesis or position in similar words used in the introduction to your position.
Apply principles of good composition, including appropriate sentence structure, grammar and meticulous attention to detail in every aspect of your writing.
Strict APA Format (7th Ed) standards will be applied to the grading of your paper so pay close attention to citations within the paper and in the list of work cited.
